:) This was so good! occationally the grammar was off but i don't think that matters much.

i love this! your writing has a truth and inspiration many will relate to and appreciate! nice job:)

aw this is really beautiful!

"I'd send a postcard to you dear,
'Cause I wish you were here"

great song. even better story. it reminds me of my little sister and our best friend.
good job! keep it up

Beautiful. It's marvellous and full of feeling. :)