Finally got a chance to read your work. My god, this plot is intriguing. Personally I do feel sympathy for Isis and I like how human you've made her (she's a believable character, which is brilliant for a leading human in this genre).

My favourite part so far was definitely the encounter with Ryan and the dream sequence with Elaxia. The only negative thing I can think of is just little ticks in the grammar, but that's something you fix later when you re-read/edit everything you've written.

A very solid start and I look forward to reading more =D

I loved it!

It's going really well so far, I think - I can't wait to see what happens next! >3
Good set-up, very mysterious.

It makes me want to write... ;.;