Alright, so I've let this sit for a while and I've finally decided to review, but don't get mad please.

It was very weird. Not as in bad weird, just, different, weird. The plot was twisted and it kind of scared me a little. I'm a slash fiend and that part was...still a little scary.

However, it was very well written. The plot was completely original and I actually wanted to finish it, despite the creepy music that kept playing in my head. It was ominous...but in a good way. Hey, it kept my attention! Plus I've apparently talked about it so much that my friend/friends want to read it. They know it's different, they know it's a bit weird, but it boggled my mind; they want to know why.

So, in short, well done! Normally, when I come across a story like this, I stop reading or just skip to the end, but I wanted to see where you took it. It still freaked me out a little, but it's an intriguing idea.

I hope i didn't offend you, because that wasn't my goal at all! I just wanted to tell you, because, well, reviews are good :-)

And you might be wondering what/why I am in the first place I'm even writing the review, because if you look at my homepage, it doesn't seem like I'm much of a writer, but in actually, I kind of am. I have a certain style, and it's not as dark as yours is (portrayed in this), but it's definitely a little morbid at times. I honestly don't know what the point of my long, tirade of a review is, but my point is: I liked your story...I think :-)

Keep writing; I can't wait to see what else you come up with :-)

Wow, that was really good :) I'll be sure to reread once it's revised! Off to read Wish I May now.

Omg! I loved this story! You're such a good writer. Great details.

:o! You did! You killed him! I can't believe it. Those poor guys. What are they going to do now? Great job though!

:o You did not just kill T'kali. That's cruel. *sniffle* I want to keep the three together. I hope things work out better than I'm thinking.

Dun Dun DUN! The plot thickens. What was it that drew this out of Frey? The taste of vampire or human blood? Maybe he's just maturing. I love the three interacting with one another. Frey is a lot more confident than I expected, but it's nice. I like that Akuji says an occasional word too instead of us kinda guessing. great job!

Wow. I missed a lot in a few days. So yeah, T'Kali dying made me unhappy. :( The madness eating everyone makes me sad too. But at least a sequel is out or coming, whichever. I loved reading your story and will make all haste to move to the next ones. :)

I hate the epilogue. But only because you told me to :P. I love bittersweet endings -when an author can pull it off - and with DoA you pulled it off so yeah, bittersweet is muy bien.

This was a sad ending. But I will cope. I'll move on to the prequel and sequel.

I actually liked the Epilogue. The only thing I can say that is "bad", is just how sad it was. I'm a sucker for happy endings, but I've been warming up to the happily never afters. :D I think your a brill writer and I can't wait to read the new things you write! More Frey please! :D

The story was amazing I loved it!
Sequel and prequel and epilogue would be amazing!

Ah, it's over? :O A prequel would be awesome, just because I like Akuji the best.

There was nothing majorly confusing, it's mostly my fault for not remembering the first chapter's title, and I was a little confused as to Frey's status as vampire or human for a while. When he started draining blood from people I was like, "wait, did I miss something?" ;)

Anyway, thanks for the story!

Prequel - good idea! Sequel - good idea! Epilogue - good idea! Love it. Anyway, about my earlier review where I said I was confused, it wasn't a big problem just some suggestions to make it flow better in my eyes (which really doesn't matter too much since it's your work, not mine). This may sound weird but I'm happy that the ending isn't happy . . . What I mean is too many stories end "happily ever after" no matter what happened and in this case "happily ever after" wouldn't have fit at all, so I'm glad you didn't use it. Anyway, I vote prequel and sequel!

aww i cant believe its over!
i believe you should write an epilogue and prequil.

=]

This story confuses me sometimes, but I like it! :) So, if I'm reading it correctly, the prologue is from Akuji's point of view, and Frey was human, but became half vampire from drinking too much vampire blood?

Anyway, lots of violence, lots of sex, me like. :P Akuji's pretty adorable, and I like the darker turn of Frey's personality as the story progresses.