this story is intriguing! i can't wait to read more ^^

I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!

Wah, super interesting chapter. Haha they turned out to be siblings. How epic.

I'm loving this story so very much. Ray and Ren. I SO should have seen that coming! I don't know why I never picked up on it.

I was stalking your review replies and I saw that you said their nerdiness isn't the only reason Kaylehn can communicate with them...Could it be because they've never had girlfriends? So she would think she can only hear nerds because nerds have a higher chance of never having had a girlfriend before. Rightrightright!? I'm so curious! :D

Oh, and, random question. How do you pronounce Kaylehn? Like KAY-lin? kay-LEN?

Nice chap.. Cara acts like she's been waiting for Ray to pay her some attention, shes so sweet! I def. did not expect jealousy from Kaylehn as a reaction though.

I suck at recognizing voices, but can ppl really recognize others from just a hello? I totally missed the Ren = bus boy hints, but bring it on!:)

I must be officially blonde if I didnt catch that relationship!OMG THOUGH!

funny ** man 'oh i get it like pretend brothers' lmfao update soon!

I love Bus Boy! Bring him back please!

I hope ren knows she has also helped his brother...

Amen to that!

Teehee, interesting characters :) I don't really understand why she's feeling so weird that Ray got the girl ...

anyway, update soon? :P

I do love Kays personality! Realists are not written very often in stories that I read so it just makes her charector different overall. I love this story! I need to finish reading what you have posted so far.
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Lol - you can pronounce my name however you like, I'm not fussed.

So I am out of ideas for Ren's name, though I'm quite pleased with myself for guessing R&R were brothers. Loved the over protective brother mode - poking, so physical! =Þ A gentleman if I knew one in this day and age.

I was surprised to see that Kaylehn showed a jealous moment so early on!

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Whoa, did not see the Ren/Ray-brother thing coming. Thank you for updating! It's laughable how often I keep checking my email inbox for an update from you. Your characters and their interactions are some quirky and fun to read! So yeah, happy Thanksgiving to you too and hope you get better soon. :D

Gosh but you guys get a lot of holidays! I enjoyed a normal Thursday, thanks.

It's good to see from the other reviews that Big-T has a fanbase. It's so common that the boss of somewhere has no idea how to use the gadgets in his/her own store. Thank goodness for the lackies who keep them up and running.

I laughed at the idea of Kaylehn being 'too nice' in this chapter. Really? She locked herself in the bathroom even though she didn't need to use it, deliberately stayed longer in there when there was someone who really DID need to use it, and then shoved this complete stranger on the way out. I guess nice is relative!

I think she's a big faker about fainting. But, if she's not, then she might want to consider visiting a neurologist as that's the third time she's blacked out recently and once she hit her head quite badly. Just saying!

Lovely as always, thanks for the fast updates. Cheers.