th end of this chapter made me crack up...the whole "river falling for fallon" thing is hilarious :D

This story was suggested to me by Castiel89 and damn, am I glad she did because it's GREAT! I envy how mature your writing is and hell, they sure sound like a great family of boys. I'm away to read the rest now and I'm all excited :)

A great feel good story. It's also has a realistic ending as Brock still keeps his personality a bit instead of becoming a completely different perfect guy person. I put off studying for my finals for you! Oh the dedication :)

Brock was sweet...
But River was silly.

>.> Last line here shows Brock as still a Masterson lol

Nice.
Very, very, very nice.
Amazing, actually.
this was really good! Not as good as the other stories, i have to admit, but it was good nonetheless.
I knew it from the very beginning when brock was assigned the art assignment that his topic would be love and that he would be drawing kansas. (btw, i like that name, and not only because i live in kansas!)
i'll be reading forrest's story soon, but before i read his, i wanna read the oneshot you wrote for river and fallon. it seems like such a long time ago that you wrote that story. its weird...
anyways, great job on this one! i really liked it!

simply breathtaking :) (not to mention cute!)

OH! I absitively, posolutely LOVED the ending! And I'm so glad I'm caught up now. I had so much going on that I hadn't read the last 2 chapters, but now I have and I loved them!
Now, I need to get started on "You Belong With Me". Can you believe it? I've read everything except that one...ah well, I never like to do things in order, that's just too normal...
Anyhoo, great job!

~Chelsea Elizabeth

Very cute ending ^^

That was so cute! I like it! Oh, wait, no... I love it!

I think I'm going to cry! I LOVED this story, just as much as Logan's story and ALMOST as much as River's story. :). I LOVED IT. I'm just sad it had to come to an end *sigh*, make sure that one-shot and Forrest's story ISN'T short! I wanna know, hey, again, is little Lena going to be in it? I miss her. :). Post 'em up soon!

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This was an adorable chapter and story :) I love the sensitive nervous wreck Brock was and it's always fun how your stories intertwine. Can't wait for the one-shot of River and Fallon!

Wow!!
I love this one!! Its one were is sweet and short and wonderful!
I can't wait for the River and Fallon one!

So cute! I really love your stories :)
So is River's and Fallon's one shot going to be while they're dating?

Aw! That was so cute! I loved it! I just love Brock!
Very well written! :]

Yay it's done! =] Haha they're so cute together too.
Haha heck yes I'm excited for Forrest's story!