Aw, poor baby :(

I'm happy to be the first person to review this.

Overall, I thought the description was very vivid. I was really captivated by the detail, by the lonely character, by the environment, everything. You wrote a very beautiful thing and I would like to thank you for sharing.

However, One thing confused me-- what do you mean no one ever looked up? I imagined the woman sitting on the floor playing and that the people were inspired by her music, and when she left, they were frozen in place because it was so captivating, at least, that's how I interpreted it. Is that what you meant by no one ever looked up?

Either that or she played beautifully but no one noticed? I don't know, maybe i just missed something haha.

Anyway, thank you so much for sharing this. It was great.

Keep writing :)

I hope that you have a chance to read my story as well. I would love to hear from you.

Hoping to see you soon :)

-Agent