 yzarC 2009-11-24 . chapter 3YAY! i just finished reading all of your stories :D and this is defintently one of my favorite out of all the stories i have read, and out of all your stories. still can't decided which is my favorite :) ninja star cookies! (sorry had to put it again:) |
 Peach 2009-10-26 . chapter 1 Update update update! hhahhahaha love your stories! |
 Soen22 2009-10-14 . chapter 3I was talking about all of them ^^ Again I loved it but I have a typo/misspelling correction, you seem to do this a lot, you spell offense offence, it's s not c! :) And so the mystery deepens...dun DUN DUN! |
 Mo- The Reviewer 2009-10-14 . chapter 3Well, it's obvious that Ava is Elizabeth! Der...
Maybe they are reincarnated because Thomas died in war, even after he promised to come back. So, maybe this is his way of "coming back"...?
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
~Mo~ |
 Court123 2009-10-13 . chapter 3This is really good!
Keep writing this!
It's awesome!!
More! |
 KelaBelle 2009-10-13 . chapter 3another amazing chapter, umm new boy in picture don't like him already. x |
 PamLee 2009-10-13 . chapter 3 I really like this story. Okay so maybe i like all of your stories hahahah you are an awesome writer! Hope you get to publish some of your stuff :)
can't wait for the next chap!! hahahah |
 MarieAnn 2009-10-13 . chapter 3:-) I am really liking this story. It's original and very well-written.
One suggestion I have:
1) It was likelike one of my dreams - Delete the second 'like'
Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep going!! |
 DOMOxKUN 2009-10-13 . chapter 3Yeah ! That sounds great ! (:
I've been finding myself looking forward to the updates of Academic Institute, Brother Dear, and I Hate That Word.
And this chapter was great!
And absolutely how you write drama with a twist. (:
It never gets boring to read.
Update soon !
Hope your doing well in your classes ! |
 reizuki 2009-10-12 . chapter 3awesome!!...can't wait for the next chapte |
 RockFan 2009-10-12 . chapter 2I like this - it's really different. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
 RockFan 2009-10-12 . chapter 1Wow, I was not expecting that. It's a great start. I noticed a couple typos (small ones but if this is for school, I thought you'd want to change them).
Okay, so now I can't find the first one but the other one is in the fourth to the last paragraph. You put 'town' instead of 'toward'.
Anyway, I really like it. |
 Soen22 2009-10-11 . chapter 2Have I told you that I love your names? I don't remember so I'll just say it again. Teehee, Damon! Ava! This is very exciting :) |
 reizuki 2009-10-09 . chapter 2woa..this is nice.. |
 PamLee 2009-10-09 . chapter 2 ah i can't wait for damon and ava to interact more! hahahah it's so intriguing :) |