he he this is funny sniff. although i must say its kinda scary when i'm reading this going "oh dear lord thats me she's describing" ...And when you put anime/yaoi cons in this light it really is amazing that any of us even bother going. Lol this is fantastic! Oh and some where in this chapter you have oesophagus and i'm going to assume you meant esophagus and that the o in front is a typo. if not oops sorry. terrific work as always sniff.

I really like this story. Really fun, I squealed like a school girl. Love the three way romance between Asher, Miles, and Seth. I wish u luck with the story. Hopefully an update in the near future. ;)

This one really is a breath of fresh air. It's nice to be able to laugh a little now and then. Sometimes we need a break from the angst right? Well I like it, and look forward to seeing this story develop as well. Thanks for anther entertaining read, Snyffles. I always look forward to reading something of yours.

omg. I love it!

lols. Can't wait for the next!!

this is great! Seth is sweet. i know that's not very descriptive, but whatever. UPDATE!

I'm not sure if my grasp of the English language is good enough to express how much I LOVED this! I was staring intently at the screen, to the point that I realised I'd gotten ridiculously close. The way you write is both engaging and hilarious. I really connected with Seth, I actually adore his character. And the guys, Asher and Miles... Both hot and wonderfully interesting. I can't wait 'til you update =)