Cool!

Your POVs are really short so it's kind of confusing. Maybe if you'd add more detail it would be better. Can't wait till the next chapter!

Cool! I'm looking forward to it :)

I like what you're doing to the story. Though the plot is getting a bit complicated, it's all clear, which I do not normally see in fictionpress stories.

I do like where you're going with this story, but I noticed a few mistakes that could be fixed with some light proofreading. For instance, the Y in New York isn't capitalized, nor is the F in Freeman. It's also good to think about the time period that your characters are set in so you can tailor their dialogue to that. You have some punctuation issues as well and you're should be your when the assailants talk about correcting a mistake. Please don't think I'm being mean because I've really enjoyed your first chapter and I look forward to reading the subsequent ones, but just fixing minor things like that would make for easier reading.

Suspenseful!

This chapter is the same as the first. Did you make a mistake?

This sounds really interesting and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!