Awesome one-shot! Love the part when Logan said, "I told you that night that I loved you, that I wanted to spend the rest of my life with you. Why, for God's sake, did you go off the next morning and get engaged to that asshole?"

Very interesting, I enjoyed it, just that I didn't expect the part where her father actually murdered that guy... Well, thanks for the story. X3

This is really good. Wasn't expecting a few of the twists (i.e murder). It was really well written, loved your characterisation too and I don't think you need to worry about him forgiving her too easily. Overall I think it worked really well. love the circle reference to the blue note and Alin.

Ah the lifestyle of the rich and famous is always interesting. Fab read.

Loved it!

I wasn't expecting murder or anything but it was an interesting addition ;)

this would make a great chaptered story!
but its still great, nonetheless...
:)

hahahaha i love it

nice work! I really liked this one...

XD HAHA.
aw~ that's so sweet. :)
thanks for the awesome oneshot!! :D :D :D

Love, love, love the way you circled back to the Alin reference at the end!!

I enjoyed reading your story, although I had difficulty following that crazy plot with her ex-fiance.

Also, I love this line, "I told you that night that I loved you, that I wanted to spend the rest of my life with you. Why, for God's sake, did you go off the next morning and get engaged to that asshole?" I would love to hear that line from some handsome man, someday.

Ah, much as I love these one shots, I feel the need for another delicate nudge for Devil Takes It All. Surely it cant take that long to churn out chapters for a REwrite...?

Loving it all
Sian x

Do continue coming up with fun one-shots on a regular basis. they make me want to forget what a crappy day i had.

I did think the kiss-and-make-up was a little premature. Not any less entertaining .. but quick.

Sukanya

I like this alot

This was a lot different from your usual writing, but I really liked this story :)

~Annoyance

I really enjoyed this one; it had some good emotional depth and it's nice to see drama with a happy ending. Hope we get more soon!