oh yes, i love the metaphor.
especially the last line. so poetic and awesome :)

i really like it, but i dont get the penned in technicolor part. can u explain it to me?

This poem rings especially true for me.

this is absolutely wonderful... so simple yet so powerful. i love it.

GENIUS.
nevermore, you've done it again.
you have no idea how PERFECT this is for me right now.
i don't know if you've been following my "colorful language"
but if you have, this is like from me to brandon.
ah. you're amazing. i'm favoriting. that's that.

i liked these last two especially.

there's an attitude to this, and it somehow reminds me of indie poptronica.
or, at the very least, cobra starship love ballads.
i'm not sure why. i think the st-st-stutter did it for me.

even though it's a short piece,
i like the way you eased the reader into the truth.
that things are not always as they seem.

my god, i saw this and the title just looked so familiar.
then i just had to see what was inside.

(i'm glad i looked.)

Love the comparison to the frustration of not being able to draw, nice.