S-So meaningful! ToT Lindsey! I love this!!

Excellent. I may not have cried, but I can hear your pain and I can see her pain. It's not just for friends, but for people in general who are constantly struggling. It's a great poem, and I commend you highly for writing such a mature and serious piece.

This line, I don't know if this is how it's supposed to read. It continues with your ocean metaphor in that portion of the poem, but doesn't quite fit properly:
Bottom of the ocean is so fun when you’re tangled in the kelp,
did you mean is not so fun? Anyway, that was my only question.

Great job, and don't be afraid to share that with not only your friends, but also other people in general.
God Bless :)