Hmm, definately a change in pace from your last chapter, but still enjoyable. Kevin sounds adorable. And calling your brothers studs, can be either very funny or completely awkward. However, in the context of what you said "It’s not like I’m exactly embarrassed to say I know them, or am related to them, they’re both studs." It's like she takes pride in it, such as if ur best friend were the school king, you kinda get that picture from that sentence. I really liked it, so thought I should tell you.

Enjoyed this one. Hope to see more soon :)

lolz LOVE IT!! im officially in love with man/boys!! UPDATE SOON!!
*number 1 fan!!*

good start so far!

seems somewhat cliche but its good! =)

LOL Randy is hilarious! XD

Haha,very nice beginning to this story,
i like it already~!
Did Stella actually bite him at the end?
Cause i was assuming that and I ROFL-ed.

hahahaha, that was so cute. I love the little banter they go through, it's so perfect. But, it's not like a hatred coming from his point, it seems more like a flirtatious banter. For her, you can see she's just not interested, and that's what makes it so funny. I'm sure most girls have had people like this in their life, so it's relateable.

You use alot of the same similes in your stories. "sun kissed skin' 'Adonis body'. They're all really great pictures, and it definitely shows who wrote this story considering I've very rarely heard anyone else use those same words. But see if you can expand on it. IDK, i'd just like to see what you can come up with.

Oh, and Max sounds hot!! lol

Update soon :)