 CoverGirlInLove 2009-11-26 . chapter 4My God, you're amazing ... and frustrating! So close! So very close! Damn the ex ... you want us to hate her don't you? Well if that's the case, then you've succeeded ... for me at least.
Great once again.
CGIL xx |
 WritingWithChocolate 2009-11-23 . chapter 4o.o Intense ending. I loved it! But who's Shannon, again? An ex? Anyhoo...UPDATE! |
 un chien andalusia 2009-11-23 . chapter 4i'd thot i'd reviewed but must've been dreaming!
i love the premise and think their phone flirtations really cute and witty. only with the way you've picked up the pace, perhaps the phone flirting will stop soon for in-person confrontations? A shame!
i also like your eclectic playlist. am a fan of monroe's happy birthday and edith piaf. so kudos. |
 dream_chaser 2009-11-23 . chapter 4 this is soo good!! i knew that solo wouldn't pass a chance to see what liv looks like...i can't wait for them to meet..oh pls update soon... |
 OrangeLegs 2009-11-22 . chapter 4Ohgod. How can I even post a proper review! My heart is fluttering like crazy. :) Hahaha! I love how you've written it in both their views. I think it really works. I mean, I've read other stories written this way but they all come out redundant. In your story though, it's not. :)
Teehee! :) Post a new chapter again soon! |
 vanderdeetza 2009-11-22 . chapter 4 -gasp-
He saw her! He saw her and he love it, right?
I think I hate this Shannon.. She steal away his attention!
Nice chappie!
I love it, you make him know her feature first...
Update, please.. |
 Silver Wig 2009-11-22 . chapter 4That was a very fun/cute chapter!
Solo's line "It's not about you anymore" totally made me want to pump my fists in the air and cheer for him. Haha. And the end made my inner thirteen year old go "Aw."
But I have to ask. Wouldn't Solo have noticed that his mystery woman was clad in flannel Betty Boop pajamas? ;D |
 macaRone 2009-11-22 . chapter 4AH
that was awsome!
it like sucked me in and blew my mind,
then it ended.
I didn't like that ending thing.
So update son.
Please.
:] |
 star123 2009-11-21 . chapter 4Not to go all squeaky and girly on you, but this was such a sweet chapter. I'm totally impressed with his method of delivering a present and that he went to see what she looked like. It's about time at least one of them had some idea who the other is (I've just noticed this is only the fourth chapter, but it feels longer!).
I was so proud of Solo with his 'It's not about you anymore' line. Too right! Why did the bookshop man ask if she was Shannon, though?
Well done him for getting the perfect gift, it's all too lovely for words. That makes me concerned, however, that things are going to have to go downhill. Sadness.
Cheers. |
 abscae 2009-11-21 . chapter 4 Just another lovely installment, huh? I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter, but moreover, I absolutely love this one all the more. There's just so much emotion present in the story and your writing style. Thanks! |
 AJones 2009-11-20 . chapter 4Very cool chappie :)
Keep updatings, yes?
-Andy Jones |
 BittersweetHearts08 2009-11-20 . chapter 4have i said before that I absolutely LOVE this story? Actually, I think I'm starting to like it more than the rest of your stories, although all of them are fantastic! anyways, I can't wait till you write again! ^_^ |
 R.A.A. Edwards 2009-11-20 . chapter 4This chapter just reinforces my theory that Solo will be the first to figure out who Liv is. It’s so cute how unintentionally they become connected with each other through other medians of their life. Liv with Solo’s book and Solo with Liv’s photo. Can’t wait till they finally meet. |
 heavengurl899 2009-11-20 . chapter 4This is one of those stories that after every chapter you just think "aw!" hahaha I loved and I hope you update soon. Hopefully they MEET each other in the next chapter :D |
 sarcasm is my middle name 2009-11-19 . chapter 4great story! |