| Reviews for Broken Telephone |
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Sweetly Sarcastic 10/8/09 . chapter 1This reminds me of MLIA so much it's not even funny. I love it. Update soon please! |
Sweet Catastrophe 10/8/09 . chapter 1 I love it! It's really good. |
heavengurl899 10/8/09 . chapter 1bahaha how funny :D |
Imminent Paradox 10/8/09 . chapter 1To be quite frank, this is AWESOME! I seriously loved it. The plot sounds really, really interesting, and your writing is basically flawless! Plus you've got a great since of humor in it :) The characters are realistic, I think, and I love the name Solo XD Poor guy, it must be odd having a name so unusual- not that that's bad or anything, unless you're in, like, elementary school or something. But so far, my favorite character is probably Jemmy. He seems pretty awesome. Okay, I'm probably boring you with my babble now :) You should just know that this is amazing, and I really look forward to reading more! Update soon, please? Maria |
RealMenSparkle 10/8/09 . chapter 1HAHAHAHA I absolutely love that. Very good job on the new story :) |
lissalee 10/8/09 . chapter 1yes, I definitely have to review :) I really liked the first sentence he said, I think I love his character already :) And the fact that he has an unusual name, that makes me like him even more! haha. can't wait for the next chapter. |
Sasha 'The Dramatic' Blue 10/8/09 . chapter 1“We were sixteen and I thought my steamy dreams of Marlon Brando had to do with suppressed childhood memories.” First off, Marlon Brando is deliciously delicious, but you already knew that. Liv is a pretty cool character, she's got something to say about her sugary drenched feelings but she humiliates herself and that adds for humourous entertainment indeedy. I love how Solo isn't made to be as this overly gorgeous guy and everyone flocks to him because he's so gorgeous and he can have any girl he wants and blablablablabla. It's refreshing really. AND JEMMY! Jemmyjemmyjems is the cutest thing ever since...a really cute thing. He's totally rad and reminds me of a European country. I'm glad you finally posted! I'm loving it so far so you better update soon. Mhmm... -Sasha |
I do believe in Faires 10/8/09 . chapter 1wow this is SO good! Love the story line, and really great adding. *adds to favorites* |
coffeelove220 10/8/09 . chapter 1“I’m going to lick her fork while she’s not looking. Maybe she’ll catch my gayness and start walking around in chaps.” LOL! I love it already. I love Jermery and Solo. I've kind got a few ideas to where this might go. I'm excited to read more. Awesome work! |
funnechick 10/8/09 . chapter 1Pretty awesome new story...can't wait to read more! |
XxButterflyxAngelxBabygirl 10/8/09 . chapter 1That was a great start! I can't wait to find out what's going to happen! I wonder if those two's siblings really are getting married to each other. I hope you can continue again soon! |
XxSCENEandHEARDxX 10/8/09 . chapter 1LOL Please update soon! I love this story! |
fuwafuwafuwari 10/8/09 . chapter 1OH! I really DO want to review! This was fantastic! Loved it! :D Thank you! Hmm... You're right, no one really uses typewriters anymore... They are awfully noisy afterall... Oh wait, Hank Moody uses them. Except that he's a fictional character. LOL |
Autumnslittledreamer 10/8/09 . chapter 1I loved this! Please keep it coming I've not found a story that's grabbed me like this in a while! |
natmarie 10/8/09 . chapter 1Intriguing idea and summary. Well-rounded and well-written plot and characters so far with some lively conversation sprinkled in. Love to see where you take this. If you get bored or are looking for something fun to read I'd love to hear what you think of what I have up. :P |