|Reviews for Broken Telephone|
| Scarlet MacDuff 10/8/09 . chapter 1
O.M.G. This story is AMAZING! One chapter and I'm already hooked. I don't know which one I want you to update more, this story or Down The Rabbit Hole... Just keep updating both haha.
LOVE IT! Keep it up and post more soon!
| readaholicxxx 10/8/09 . chapter 1
that was hilarious haha
great start to the story
I think this is going to be very interesting haha!
| swellhats 10/8/09 . chapter 1
I enjoyed this. Anticipating the next, update soon!
| AJones 10/8/09 . chapter 1
This seems like a cool story. Weird but cool. Eheh, well, I'll be waiting for more updates!
- Andy Jones
| EvilSeaHorsey 10/8/09 . chapter 1
I loved it! I love it I love it I love it!
New chapter! New chapter! New chapter! :):):):):)
I'm effing excited to read this P!
| Aeryn MacDonald 10/8/09 . chapter 1
This is adorable :) I love the "humanness" of each of your characters. They all have their own faults.
| myymonsterownsyerrs 10/8/09 . chapter 1
It's hilarious, I love it.
| The Dumbing Down Of Love 10/8/09 . chapter 1
LOL. "“Hush you,” Meredith growled. “He can’t be gay. What would the neighbors think?”"
I love you. So much, in fact, that I might start stalking you!
You'd better install a security camera in your bathroom. Heh.
Also, are you aware that the summary says "Nothing person that
was the rule." ...maybe you meant "Nothing personal, that was the rule"?
You also said viola instead of voila at some point P
The first few paragraphs were really confusing...you might wanna maybe fix that...acuse she was talking about her sister getting married and then HER phone said future husband and I was confused S
And dysfunction, not disfunction.
But what an awesome plot D How the hell did you think that one up? I'm getting attached to the characters already D
Yaye. Totally cheered me up from the fact that some stupid uni thought it would be a good idea to hold med interviews halfway through the HSC. [The HSC is like...the end-of-year-12 exams that...decides whether you get into whatever uni course you want.]
| chambucket 10/8/09 . chapter 1
so far, excellent! o so embarasing, 'future husband' comment lol.
| HighOnBrokenWings 10/8/09 . chapter 1
"I’m going to lick her fork while she’s not looking. Maybe she’ll catch my gayness and start walking around in chaps.”"
Oh. My. God.
I actually laughed aloud. That was REALLY funny!
"Of course she didn’t know what he looked like so every time she imagined him he’d very a little."
Vary in there. Not very. I was astounded that I found a mistake in this! I read one of your other stories, Rough Petals. And I loved it! Only, I had to take it onto my other computer that lacks internet, so I never got around to reviewing. But this, well, this was an amazing beginning!
I love Jeremy, awesome character! Its really predictable, (Is it? Or is it really not? Because I think it'd be funny if they WERE completely different weddings) But hey, got to love the cliches! Solo. What a name! Creative for coming up with it :D
Well, please update soon. This is full of geniusness, and you are a fricking awesome writer!
| emopoet 10/8/09 . chapter 1
I loved it! Awesome as usual. But I did get confused when Liv said “I didn’t even know you had a brother.” since Solo did tell her that his brother was getting married in the first part of this chapter. But still, loved it. :)
| Silencia 10/8/09 . chapter 1
I wuved it XD I realy wanna read more! Okay, I'm done...
| Erin 10/8/09 . chapter 1
Loved it:) thats all i got to say.
| SoulSam 10/8/09 . chapter 1
a new story from you? awesome. this is always a good thing, especially considering we'll be able to enjoy a double dose, with the rabbit hole still going strong :)
ok, so i already love this one, so cute and fun and i can't wait for those two to meet! although their phone conversations are mighty entertaining, but i guess if this one's a shorter story, they'll meet sooner rather than later.
i'm really excited to see this continue and also can't wait for tomorrow! fingers crossed you post the new chapter for trh
| Dancing.Elephants 10/8/09 . chapter 1
Oh I like this ]
The whole mystery thing makes me super intrigued... on their behalf
and oh i hope they meet each other and then are stil tlking on the phone and they don't know its the same person.
and then they get jealous of the phone friend not knowing its the same person!
That would be delicious.
Update soon - love you're ideas ]