You definitely have a way with words.

Don't ever say your work sucks, because this piece did not suck in any way. I know this might be way too personal of a question, so feel free to avoid it, but since you said that this piece was true... is this something you've been going through or that relates to your life at the moment?

This piece was beautifully written even though it was simple. I got the feeling of heartbreak and pain and hope and then hurt just like how the girl was pretty much on an emotional rollercoaster. The ending was sad but well-written.

Great job! :)

I know how she feels