Wow...Really really dark, I love it! Just my type of story! Good job!

I like the style of the story. I like the repetition of the color red and how you layer different meanings upon each other. I also liked how the plot slowly revealed itself.

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Very nice. I like the imagery. It was very good.

Finally, a decent story. A more than decent story. This was impressive, thank you for gracing us with your talent.

Crazy dark. The whole layout is awesome, RED, I like how it breaks up the sub-plots, it creates almost a poetic feel. Good one.