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Jalusha Hetsipi 2009-11-07 . chapter 13
You just made my morning :) another GREAT chapter! Keep them coming :D
King0Mik 2009-11-07 . chapter 13
Ah, whatever. I could really care less.

Ya know, I was thinking of the appearance of a character from Full Metal Panic! when I made Gabriel. His outfit is also Kenshin Himura's outfit (from Rurouni Kenshin) except in different colors. You could also say that about the hair, though...

Anyhoo, I also took Gabriel's name from a book series I read. And I just randomly wanted him to have purple hair.

Also, randomly, the reason for him having a katana on each side of his waist is because he is ambidextrous.

You know, I THINK WE SHOULD TOTALLY HAVE A RANDOM FLASHBACK!
Yip...
King0Mik 2009-11-05 . chapter 12
XD
There was a meeting! *laughing*
Anyhoo, thanks to this, I have a new idea or one you already have come of with.
Jalusha Hetsipi 2009-11-05 . chapter 12
Yet ANOTHER really great chapter! :) I love this story! UPDATE!
Jalusha Hetsipi 2009-10-26 . chapter 11
Great as usual :) you make my day (or night)
King0Mik 2009-10-26 . chapter 11
Speaking of math, I was doing math homework. OH! HONORS, YO! HONORS! Anyhoo, how are they in a room with completely no mention of entering a building and coming out of a snowstorm? GEESHERS!
You are welcome, Maygies.
Jalusha Hetsipi 2009-10-26 . chapter 10
Awesome as always :) keep it up and UPDATE!
King0Mik 2009-10-25 . chapter 10
Aw... Don't y'all just LOVE cliffies, Maysies?
And for the rest of you, the 'J' in Johann is pronounced as 'Y.' DON'T ASK MEH WHY! ASK MAYSIES!
King0Mik 2009-10-25 . chapter 8
Ya know, Maysies, when I was creating Yuki, I was thinking of Sode no Shirayuki's appearance in the Zanpakuto Rebellion Arc of BLEACH, not a monster. Oh well. *sighs again*
King0Mik 2009-10-25 . chapter 7
And I've found yet another big mistake of yours. *sighs* You were not supposed to have Rika in nighttime. That is Kira's showtime. Kira, as in the quiet personality within the moon fairy, Kari. GEESHWERS! STOP GETTING OUR CHARAS CONFUSED!
Jalusha Hetsipi 2009-10-25 . chapter 6
Great as ever! But less random... that's not a bad thing (it actually makes more sense this way). UPDATE! (and tell me if my reviewing is getting annoying)
timayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy 2009-10-24 . chapter 1
I dont want to disseaper:S Well i reviewed, and youre story is quite good. Good descriptions and i cant for the life of me tell who the authors writing the parts are. LOL. It can be a bit jumpy though. Like its kinda like skipping several paragraphs in a book, ya know?
King0Mik 2009-10-24 . chapter 6
Hahaha! Will to go on. Anyhoo, did you take the name Lira from the Star Sign, Lyra? WHY DOESN'T SHE HAVE A JAPANESE NAME? GEESH!
King0Mik 2009-10-22 . chapter 5
MEANIE-ISH!
I see you decided to have your slacker-side come out and just edit only my para and then do NOTHING!
Jalusha Hetsipi 2009-10-22 . chapter 5
short chapter, but thats alright :) lov the story so farr!
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