"Shivering heart." Good image.

I like the 'autumn melody' part the best. :)

I dug this...it's like the fear of the unknown meets the fear of falling. It's so grade school innocent meets slightly cynical/world-weary adult female. Or at least that's what I got from it. All in all, who the hell WANTS to be rejected? Especially when they've got a jones for the guy. Well, I say go for it. Ultimately, it's up to you! Best wishes!

This was such a sweet poem! I really liked how you expressed your feelings and how you went from poem-form to a simpler text-form.
Keep it up!
The Reverse Edge Blade

well written poem, I wish you the best of luck
just be yourself when you two talk,

Oh man, I'm going through the exact same situation right now *sigh*. I wish you the best of luck with everything. Oh yeah and the poem is amazing! O_O It says it all for me. Please keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^