Hm... nicely done. Took me awhile to think about it, but I like! Please write on.

~Anna~ ^_^

Really lovely - very expressive.

i love this! none of us should be made to color in the lines! great use of words and small lines. well done!

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I'm bad at reviews, but I like this.
The alliteration and the flow is nicely done.
And it's true.