the writing style isn't whip-whooping great but you have done a good job in writing the twist to a well known fairy tale... it's true. good or bad, it really depends on what side we are looking into... haha... it was a fairly nice idea.. ^_^

I think it was interesting to say the least. I keep feeling bad for the wolf. I think he should have took the oppertunity to try baby back ribs; little red riding hoods baby back ribs. Good job.

This is my most honest and actual opinion, free of any of the grammatical or critical criticisms I add to my reviews: WTF?

Seriously man, the whole thing was a good idea to twist the whole story thing, but the lack of large paragraphs, better story telling with more dialogue and descriptions of what's happening and what's going on with somebody, heck, even some descriptions like "The chair rocked forward. Grandma gasped. Then the chair rocked backward. Grandma gasped again. Then the chair rocked forward again. Grandma, once again, gasped. The whole process repeated itself for 6 more times till finally, the chair dipped too far in forward and threw the poor old lady right into the shelf, hitting it with such force that the doors closed in on her and locked themselves shut" and a little logistics to the whole thing (AKA no extremely random endings that rush so much you leave dedicated readers with WTF? faces) would have made it better.

Alas, the whole thing was a decent idea put to type in an extremely mediocre fashion. I found almost none of it good and mostly saw bad in the usually beautiful art of writing. 1/5, and please, improve and if you think you can't, trust this from a mediocre writer of several years who made really ** stories just last year: you will improve.

i loved the creative twist... though i didn't really enjoy you writing style(just a personal preference)... but good job!!

XD LMFAO WHAT A ** :( pporr wolfy :( (n). XD quite random :D good job