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notyourbiz 2009-12-05 . chapter 18
*tear drop* I'm so sad its over,but I do have to say that this is an amazing story! I love Lucas! And i still love Cole even after what he did to her.I mean he was only trying to get the girl he wanted and it honestly wasn't his fault that she fell in love with him. I love that you actually based him off a real guy. Generally outspoken things was very original and it was the bomb! Keep on writing :D
Wow ! :D 2009-12-04 . chapter 18
Okay, to start off with, i am IN LOVE with this book.
First, because it has perfect grammar (yes i know, im picky -.-)
Second, because it relates to real life.
Third, because its not like most of the new, cliche books being made.
and Fourth, cause you can actually RELATE to the characters. Ellie is my fav, btw. Lol. Anyways, i look forward to reading more of your writing ;)
Coriander Spice 2009-12-03 . chapter 17
D:
Aww...
Now I'm sad.
It's over. Great story! I loved it. You are an amazing writer. This was fantastic.
Coriander Spice 2009-12-03 . chapter 16
AW! I totally hope I'm the first to review. This is adorable! I love it! *goes to read next chapter*
Coriander Spice 2009-12-02 . chapter 15
FUAW! I waited forever for this! Best. Chapter. Ever. But I hate it. Because now I have to wait even longer to find out what happens! D: You're a cruel person. But a great writer. Love it. :)
-Coriander
Randomosity 2009-11-15 . chapter 9
You should watch Mean Girls :)

Btw, loving this story. Lily is fierce
notyourbiz 2009-11-14 . chapter 14
I actually read this right after you posted it,but
the internet stopped working so i couldn't review :( So here I am reviewing and telling you that I really enjoyed this chapter! I don't know why she's that upset, jeez. Well I guess she's liked him for a long time, even though it doesn't seem like its been that long. Well she's gonna goto Lucas's house? I'm sorry if I was Lucas i'd feel like a back-up plan :( Well update soon!
Rimca Sonali 2009-11-14 . chapter 14
I assumed Cole was a jerk...but holy cow! He's a horrible stuck-up jerk! Keep writing and please update soon!
Coriander Spice 2009-11-11 . chapter 14
You have no idea how long I waited for this. XD I'm so excited!! Please update soon!!
notyourbiz 2009-11-10 . chapter 13
hmm if you ask me ellie is being a total B. You can't give your best friend the cold shoulder for liking a guy who you told her to ask out the day before,unless you have a legit reason, but you have to tell her why. Ellie is going about this the wrong way > <
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Coriander Spice 2009-11-10 . chapter 13
Good chapter! Can't wait for the next.
notyourbiz 2009-11-09 . chapter 11
oh haha I totally didn't relize i'd skipped this chapter which is amazing if I do say so myself :) And I do say so ! Yup so i'm less confused now that I know this came before chapter 12 but it makes Ellie's behaviour in chap 12 even more confussing :)
notyourbiz 2009-11-08 . chapter 12
What the heck?? What does Ellie know that she's not telling?? My nerves are going haywire! :) Aww Lucas is such asweetheart! Update soon!
Coriander Spice 2009-11-08 . chapter 12
*crosses fingers* I hope I'm the first reviewer.
Awesome chapter! I wonder why Ellie was saying that. I want to find out so update as soon as you can! :3
lycan 2009-11-08 . chapter 11
Whoa
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