woo woo :) yay it's finally started but update soon i would like to find out the terms of this little challenge

Awesome chapters I must say...liking the twists to the holidays and their persona's they play...can't wait to see more.

O, can't wait to find out how they're going to try to out due each other.

I was disappointed that the story was in first person but I still liked it. It was interesting and I'm wondering, if Pumpkin and Lady Bunny are sworn enemies, are other people for holidays enemies as well or is it just them?

It sounds interesting. I'm curious as to what the game is. And Bunny and Pumpkin sound interesting so far.

awesome intro...but really wanna read what's to happen next.

Great chapter! The term 'Lady Bunny', however, sounds a bit strange to me. The two seem to contradict each other, probably because 'bunny' has come to be linked to promiscuous women - damned Playboy mag. So does the thought of Santa-to-be admiring Jack, now that I think about it. On the other hand, I do love the characters, especially Chris' sisters. You also gave great insights to everyone's relations with everyone else (I hope you understand what I mean - it took some time for me to word that sentence and I'm still not sure I've done it correctly).

:) catherine m.

This story sounds great. I'm very curious as to what this 'game' is. i can't really say anything except that I think I will thoroughly enjoy this.

:) catherine m.