|Reviews for L Street|
| she left ringing in his head 2/19/10 . chapter 1
'we count the days as rooms'
what great imagery!
| tonight we bloom 10/13/09 . chapter 1
this is absolutely wonderful! i love so many things in this, such as "box-springs" and "we dream of sounds we heard yesterday" and "unfurled under our feet."
love love the last line. overall great job!
i would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my piece; it would mean a lot!
| Little girl Big world 10/10/09 . chapter 1
This is wonderful!
Favorite part: "sounds we heard yesterday,
the streets singing
as they unfurled under lamplight."
I like the use of the word unfurled.
Very nice work :)
| give me november 10/10/09 . chapter 1
this made me shiver, made me think. loved it:)