'we count the days as rooms'

what great imagery!

this is absolutely wonderful! i love so many things in this, such as "box-springs" and "we dream of sounds we heard yesterday" and "unfurled under our feet."

love love the last line. overall great job!

i would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my piece; it would mean a lot!

This is wonderful!

Favorite part: "sounds we heard yesterday,

the streets singing

as they unfurled under lamplight."

I like the use of the word unfurled.

Very nice work :)

this made me shiver, made me think. loved it:)