Well, it looks like things are off to a great start! I like the dialogue - even though you are complaining about it - it brings out a lot of the chracterizations.

I think my favorite line was "In what way do you share them, then?" I would so say that! Well, I say a lot of things, but hey.

Remind me that I have some syntax things I want to mention next time we talk. There were just a couple little things that confused me.

Anyways, great job my chocolate loving amigo!

- Tens