It's not too deep; rather, it's something we experience every day.

But it's still deep. Whoa.

It's got the flow, it's got the rhythm, it's got the words, it's got the metaphors.

But it's something else. I never thought of it like this. It being the whole thing. The conversations. We don't TRY to listen to each other. All we care is that we are heard. And sometimes, though the traffic of ANYTHING blocks the other's voice out, we don't care it drowns ours out too. We don't care. That's the problem that came through in this piece. And it was spectacularly done. Amazing job!

Since you reviewed my story, I decided to come and look at some of your things. This was good, and it flows really nicely. Great job!

I loved the simple tone that this piece had. It flowed quite nicely and your writing was fantastic. Good job.