I adore this.
It flows beautifully, and each line has so much meaning and so much emotion. Stunning work. :D

rolliepollie44

This is really touching. I feel there's something very deep and emotional behind the words and that makes it all that much more enticing to read. Beautiful. You definitely have a way with words, keep writing.

PS Thank you for reviewing one of my poems! :D

This was a very good poem, it was descriptive and flowed well. This "man", I find, can represent so many male figures in one's life, and one could do a lot of great analysis with this poem. It's deep in its own simple way. Great job!