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Ger Bushy 2009-10-17 . chapter 1
You make me jealous. :(

I wish I do celebrate Halloween too... The way you describe it makes it seem really fun and even exciting.

I've to agree that the ingredients you use are really good, you explain each well. Dark, very dark, and beautiful.

The rhyme is indeed well-done, better than the other one that I'd reviewed.

Like the last line most, "on their never-ending search for candy", makes me lick my lips> *snatches up a candy bar*
Izanagi's Muse 2009-10-14 . chapter 1
i enjoyed this poem, the ryhming was cool and I like the ingredients you picked for the poem, it gets me in the mood for halloween.
KelaBelle 2009-10-13 . chapter 1
Wow such a great poem for halloween, I like it., it goes well with the summary too, so catchy. good job!
Mr Ragna Badguy 2009-10-13 . chapter 1
Well, I don't know why, but this poem seems rather random to me. It's like what you've written here seems pretty much like what one will do for Halloween in literal hell. You know with the demons, imps and what not. Maybe it's your intention. I don't know to be honest. But I do see a kiddy-like feel in this work. It's like some sorcery scene in a kiddy fantasy/supernatural flick and I really like it. :)

P.S: Pay back via The Eternal Grail. :)

-From The Roadhouse. :)
8DaysTillSunday 2009-10-12 . chapter 1
I loved the frightening gore, stopping the angels at the door part. That was really clever. Very fun, creative poem. I enjoyed it.
ADSpencer 2009-10-11 . chapter 1
Excellent answer to the challenge (just realized that I forgot to say mine was for the challenge). Very well done. I love the parts of different monsters. Oh, and that you said "to stop the angels at the door." Very inventive line. As well as a way to keep the angels from stopping evil doings, haha, it reminded me of the plagues of Egypt (you know, coming to take the first born away). I wasn't sure if that was intended, but it worked that way too, lol. Very well done!
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