I liked that chapter. It was nice, though I liked Chris more!! haha.

Is that the end? It felt like the end.

Anyway, I loved it. :)

Oh, this is... well, I want them to be togeather! Really , I do! They need each other, he's a little mad, that's all good, and she is miserable and awkward to the point that you're not quite sure you understand her.

Yes - I want them togeather

-- but of course,where would be the drama in that? :P hehehe

Loz xx

Ohh, that was really emotive. I'm sorry I haven't caught up, i have had lots of college work to do! Very, very good chapter!

oh. I enjoyed thatI really want to know and understand the past of the Fanshaws. I am desperately waiting for another chapter!

Oh, I want another chapter now! There is something about Chris that is just... I don't know. I love him one minute and the next I don't. In this chapter I loved him.

“It’s perfectly disgusting to be friends with such low human beings.”
- I loved this line, it was perfect!

Please update when you can, although don't rush, I think rushing hurts everyones work. :) I am looking forward to another chapter.

Very nice! I can totaly relate to this. My personality is pretty much identical to Tess's and I'm Canadian too! You were very discriptive and you painted a vivid picture in my mind, but you could've been a bit clearer in the beginning on why her article was offensive. Keep up the good work!

Ohh!! Nice ending. I am starting to think that Chris is a little.. well, starting to think that I don't like him very much. He's interesting and irritating all at once. I can't wait for another update, I do love this story. :)

Oh, I do like this Chris. He's an odd one, indeed, but there is just something about him that makes me want to scream 'MORE!'. I love your writing. I do. :)

Eve is a cow. I don't like her at all, but then again, I don't suppose anybody will. I did like the fact she takes cocaine though, very interesting.

This, by the way, made me laugh 'Now, there is no point at all for me to dwell on my characters’ character traits in so unnecessarily prolonged a fashion' - very clever, witty narrative device there. :)

Nice! :D

I do love how this is written. It's perfect! I've got a 'happy smile' all over my face now, after reading the end.

I can't wait to see another chapter, well, read another chapter! 'Tis brillaint! It is nice to read things on here well written, they really engage and captivate me, and I'm sure, everybody else who has read this. :D

this is very interesting. Very well written too. I hope you can update it soon. :)

This is such a lovely story. The detail very good and the conversation between characters right for the time setting. I am curious about the adventure Tess is embarking on so please continue...:)

Cheers

This is really very well done! I love the description, the dialogue is tight and crisp...:)

I am so curious as to join Tess on her adventures

:)