Wow. Dang haunting.

Loved these lines:

"Its towers were blue, its bridges were red

Its plains were a blacktop where faeries tread"

"Now I live in a world of no Larry Land

Where reality TV is all that pretends"

"And some people kill, and some people die

And you get called emo if you bother to cry"

I'm not good at deep analysis or critiquing but I really like this and found it to have some quality about it that leaves you feeling haunted. Maybe it's because all of us have a 'Larry Land' somewhere... Well done.

That is EXACTLY what my school is like! Nice work! I loved this!