This is heartbreaking, but very beautiful. I have been through the same thing. It's rough, but you'll find someone worthy of your love. Great job. You should read my piece "I shine less without you". It deals with the same subject.

I definitely see the underlying emotion in this piece, although the syllables were off, negatively affecting the beat. I feel rhyming definitely restrained your use of vocabulary, that could have definitely made this piece much deeper than it is.

In the end it was a good read.

Wow. Beautiful. Know the feeling, in a way. Beautiful poem.