i absolutely love this. it's amazing. i love the emotion and intensity dripping from every single word. awesome job. :)

Aww, thank you, thank you, thank you! I loved it :) I liked that you left most of the background story to our imagination, even if it was because you didn´t have the time to write it XD Aand, I loved that the ending was hopeful and not terribly sad, like the rest of it :( Sad but great!

Ah, I can´t believe your birthday was almost two months before mine and I still haven´t finished yours D: I´m sorry, I´ll try to speed it up!

Thanks again, it was awesome!!

Aw... This was really sad and really sweet in a good/bad/iono way.

It's beautiful just the way it is. Although you don't go into detail about the accident, the lingering emotion is clear ad moving. I really liked jellyfish metaphor, too.

It's perfect! Just right. There was enough about the accident and his reaction that we get it without having it shoved in our faces.

I remember why you're awesome and how I loves yoose.

I don't think you need to go into detail about the accident/their relationship/etc. I think it's very poignant the way it is

I'm glad that when I come back to , this is the first story I read. You really felt for the characters, and you couldn't help wondering about their relationship, and hoping, longing for either of the characters to show love for one another. And at the end, they came together over something that was original, yet realistic. And adorable. With the exception of a few commas here, this story is close to a perfect oneshot.