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Reviews For: Awaiting the Muse
Ai Miyazaki 2009-10-12 . chapter 1
Deep! great imagery to convey your point of her lost self. The books, a symbol of knowledge, rotting was a great idea. I also like the kind of "cave woman" look you describe her with, with the bird bones in her hair and the looks of madness. Perfect length, to get your point across, too! very well done!
DeeFective 2009-10-12 . chapter 1
Absolutely lovely. I really liked all the imagery going on in here. Beautiful descriptions and great word choice. You're writing is pretty good too. Nicely done.
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