aw!

A really nice story.

But sometimes, the speech is more slang and modern than the time period the setting suggests.

It was short, but cute cute cute. I loved it :)

You are a fantastic storyteller! Really, it's almost like an odd bedtime story :) Absolutely adored the ending- you summed everything up so very well! GREAT story!

I was squealing over the adorable cuteness of the froggy for ages. :)

This one caught me eye, all right C:

I like your writing style here... I'll definitely follow this one 'til the end.

It caught my interest quickly. I enjoy the fairytale remakes a lot... I like your style, too. Keep it up, I'm looking forward to an update! :)

hey good start! your language tends to be a little casual and sometimes it doesn't flow very well. but overall it's quite nice (: keep it up.

How adorable the little frog, Alex, is! Him tucked in that bed was so sweet! Another wonderful fairytale retelling, I can't wait to see how this turns out :)