Amen. lol. I love this. It's a nice little piece on Lilith becoming a demon. The first feminist. :P Write on!

Hey hon!

I have to say this poem made my neck prickled. At first I felt sorry for Lucifer but in the end, it felt real creepy. A promise that was made to perfection and not just an all talk but no acts. Despite the darkness, this poetry was beautiful! Awesome job!

Oh wow, this is great! And I can see the allusions to the show, but it's mostly about the fall and Lilith's choices, so it's totally a great telling of the myth of Adam's first wife.

wow, powerful,true,sucha gr8 retelling of the most famous tale...

Amazing.

The part I loved the most is Lucifer's last words.

You know one of my favorites songs from Seether has that title LOL.

"Seeing how easily

Just one of them gave in

Shows me how simple it

Is to breed beauty in to sin.

God says they’re special-

I say they’re trash.

And I’ll make sure

Not one of them will last."

I really loved.

YohKo B.