i will definitely follow your story ... you have got a great story line and you know how to describe things without being to dramatic. A big get going, you show potential and should really keep writing.

Your new chapters are great! You have gotten a lot better at letting the reader see the character progress. What drives them, ect.
I also only found one little grammar thing!
Great job.
Gwyn

That was interesting... I can understand wanting the pain, but couldn't she kill herself by putting so much stress on herself?

Thanks for doing this update! Your writing has improved a lot (from what I remember of the first time anyways) and it seems as though you added in a lot more imagery. Great job!
Can't wait for the other chapters come be put back up !
-Gwyn

Nice.. I was reaing this story before, and I can't wai till the next chapter.. Although I still find it werid that Jack seems to be able to tell she's a girl.. it makes no sense, but I guess it will all make sense later on.

OH MY GOSH! you're putting it back up :D It disappeared from my faves and I couldn't find it and I was like "NO!"
I'm glad it's back because it's an awesome story.

I really like this story so far.
But I want to know how she got into this situation, and why she keeps reapeating "it was not your fault".
I also have no idea where this story is going.
I'm kind of hoping that it will be a love story between her and one of the guys, but that's just me.
It's very interesting, this story, and I'm dying to find out what happens.

hey I love your story but I was just wondering why did you delete it before and are reposting it now? Are you rewriting it? Your story is so funny though...I hope you write more soon!

What happened to the other story? The same one?