|Reviews for Melvin T Bentley|
| Guest 5/6/13 . chapter 13
WHEN WILL YOU UPDAAAATTEEEEE?! D;
| gwyn15 3/20/13 . chapter 13
Thanks for updating! I hope you continue!
| ThEcRa-ZcHicK 2/11/13 . chapter 13
So funny! I love it and I hope you write more!
| Firine 2/8/13 . chapter 13
Loved it! I laughed so hard. Please keep it coming. :)
| Anonymous 8/23/12 . chapter 13
I suddenly have this urge...to see Jack jealous mwuhahahahahaha
| guest 8/19/12 . chapter 13
"as more and more males filed into the in beside me and pulled out the left over juice" ? error
It has changed o:
| boredom.kills 8/17/12 . chapter 5
Re-reading this...for the...nth time :)
I'm really curious about the guys' history. Sounds interesting...especially Jack. heissodreamy /
| Kelly-Green 8/16/12 . chapter 13
Jackson has magical powers.
I can't figure out why the whole school thinks so well of him. From what I've gathered, he used to get in lots of fights and beat the crap out of guys. Also he's been friends with the guys since their early years and something must've changed since than.
I think I remember from another edit that his twin brother used to be in the group too and he died? That would mean that there were two sets of twins in their group! Is his rash/scar thing a burn scar from what killed his brother?
| Kelly-Green 8/15/12 . chapter 8
Holy crap hahaha Brit is Ron Weasley and the girl is Hermione Granger.
| Kat Annie 8/12/12 . chapter 1
I just wanted to say that I've been stalking you for a while now, way back when you were on Quizilla and Project Fiction. For a while I thought you had stopped writing, but I'm so excited to have found you again and that you've UPDATED! :'D EXCITEMENT EXCITEMENT!
You write male characters so perfectly! You're such an inspiration. I'm, um, kind of a hard core feminist, and your story is this perfect balance of like...girls being badass without chopping guy's dicks off. I want there to be more stories of girls being tough and reckless, but when I write, I always start to sway back and forth because it's like, "awwww, man...I don't want to treat the guys in my stories like shit just to prove that girls are awesome, too. That's not feminism, that's, er, sexism the other way".
I'm babbling. But I love your characters. I love their depth. I love Chloe/Tucker because she's not some poor femme that needs to be rescued. Every time she taunts her "buddy" , I sit back in my chair and wish I was fierce as her. And I LOVE that about your writing! Not only are YOU and inspiration, but your CHARACTER is as well. And THAT'S the sign of a really, truly, talented writer.
So thank you for posting this online to share with everyone. 3 I really hope you consider publishing this story one day, but no pressure! :D
| Kat Annie 8/12/12 . chapter 13
How has this not been published yet? Why isn't this on my bookshelf?
| Najmin 8/2/12 . chapter 13
I am so glad to check this story and find two new chapters! I've been following this ever since i discovered it on quizilla and thought it was an abandoned story. But i love it! Chloe's character is amazing, love the fact that she pathetically fought back when tied up unlike shawn ) she's a great rounded character - you make such amazing and hilarious characters!
Are you going to make her friends discover her gender soon? I cannot wait to see their reactions. Thanks for updating and cannot wait till the next chapter!
| anonymous 8/2/12 . chapter 7
I vaguely remember this from quizilla...but wasn't there a locker room scene and nerdy interaction after this o: i really liked it too XD.
| kuroyuki009 7/31/12 . chapter 13
*o* i hope this story gets finished. It's wonderful thus far!
| Guest 7/21/12 . chapter 13
please do update ;.; i'm dying