Wow!! That's amazing! Poor children.. they must be wondering what's going on and why things aren't normal. And The parents must be worrying a lot!!
Is the story about Edmund then? When I first started reading it I thought it was about Arthur. I suppose that it was hard for lots and lots of families then. I think it is such a lovely story. Please put some more on as soon as November is over!

Very nice chapter. I think I can just about wait until Decemeber... just. :)
Good luck with the writing competition!

oh no! Who's gonna die? :( Great chapter, I really liked it. Please update when you can. :)

Oh, very good. I can't wait for this to get going, it's very good.

Interesting turn of events - I'm eager to read more!
There is absolutely no CC I can give at all, so job well done! You're quite good at this... lol. I really like your narrations, they're very... insightful? I'm not sure that's the right word, but it's the closest I can come up with off the top of my head (which is slightly depressing, really).

Anyway, keep it up!
Wherein Lies

Oh, I want to know what happens now! I liked that. It was good. :)

:) This seems a promising start. I predict Edmund's role will be more important than he suspects.

I like the setting of this story too, and it is very well written.

The plot is still a mystery to me though and I'm curious now to see what happens next.

Wherein Lies

it's adorable & interesting at the same time...
although I do wonder how it goes on... Keep it up c:

OHH, this is very interesting. I like it. I would like you to write more ;)