There is something seriously weird with that gang and I can't wait to find out what it is. I was so happy when I saw you had updated. I hope next time it will be a shorter waiting time but I understand how hard it can be to update. =] I love this story.

I really like ur story, its great! =D
One thing I'd like to say though is at first u said Lucy was six and then u said she was two, so that was kind of confusing.
But otherwise I like it, I can't wait to read the rest =)!

Ah! Hurry, write more! I love the twist of him telling Rhea's friends he's her boyfriend! I wana know if she'll rat him out.
I think her character type will keep his sneaking out a secret. I think it would be cool if every night he went toher room and they talked about stuff before he sneaks out. It would be a good way to raise their trust in eachother. Ooh! Please write more SOON!

I think your story is very good and i think you deserver more than your four, now five reviews.

You.Are.A.Lifesaver. I am so serious right now. I have been studying for exams all night and I look and see TWO new chapters for this story, my favoutire fiction press one and I was so relieved. I actually nearly jumped up and did a dance I was so happy to have a break from studying. You just saved me. I loved the last two chapters and I can't wait for more so please update as soon as you can. I'm glad Rhea told her friends the truth and it will be fun to watch how the whole fake boyfriend story works out with the rest of the school. =]

This story just keeps getting better and better plus I'm in love with the title, when I saw an alert to say you had updated I nearly jumped up and danced I was so happy. =] Keep writing because I want to know more. Lots of unanswered questions I can't wait to find the answers for. I hope you update soon! x

Wow, this is amazing. Are you planning on publishing it? It's definitly good enough to be published. =] I can't wait for more. Only thing I can say to help you would be to watch your grammar but even that was pretty good! =]

Nice story you have got here.

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