Simple, and still catchy. Great.

I like the rhyming and simple imagery here. Nicely done. :)

i really got a subtle but defined pic of the little girl in my mind.
and you used only so many words! - kudos. :D

it was nice to read this after skimming through so many of the other poems out there.
thanks for keeping simplicity tasteful and above all, true to its meaning.

Lovely.


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