There are a few spelling mistakes but those are only meniscule errs. I really am beginning to wonder what would happen to Ariella. She seems to me like a breath of fresh air and as cut as a button lmao.

Carry on my good man, carry on

XD XD XD (Don't mind me lol)

I can't believe not many has reviewed this thing! It should be stacking in the reviews by now! I like this story. Very much too! Randomly came across it but I am happy I did!

Really well written I must say and your descriptions of the characters and their personalities can clearly be seen. No grammar or spelling mistakes at all and the first chapter has already made a great impact and flow. Can't wait to read the next ones! Hasta Lasagna babeh! lmao

-Bec-

I like it. I enjoy how it seemed just like it was taking place in the normal world, then BAM, bring up the demon and soul stuff. The pace is just right too, at least for the way your story is going. Anyway, I can't find anything huge to correct. There's the occasional spelling or grammar error, but we all have some of those. Other than that, it's very good writing and has great potential. That being said, If you would look at my story that would be wonderful. It's called Pravos, here's a link.
/s/2721821/1/Pravos
Any thoughts or suggestions are quite welcome. Thank you.