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HyP3R N Ov3RIM4GIn4TIv3 2009-11-25 . chapter 23
are you going to make a sequel for this becuz i love this story becuz of all the mixed emotions and the great plot. i feel bad 4 Akuji if the story's left hanging like that...
Saffron Oliander 2009-11-22 . chapter 12
I'm sort of wondering why you're so good at writing sex scenes!
I definitely LOVE this story!
disgusteddiscussion 2009-11-21 . chapter 23
The end? :'(

But what a lovely ending it was :) Despite the shortness of the epilogue (*pokes T'kali too*) I like.

Yeah, I may very well forgive T'kali all his jerk-ness . . . after that sumptuous - if painful - sex scene I'm just feeling very forgiving . . . *shrugs* I may still have to beat him with a stick - since I have permission AND assurance he won't resist - but I think I may forgive him.

And even though I know he wants Akuji back because he's a possesive little vamp, I still got that that's-so-cute grin that you get when stuff is just so cute and it DOESN'T go away, you know the one? Well and knowing that he will one day love Akuji just makes it sweet (for me at least). Imma miss your lovely boys! :'(

No pressure about telling T'kali's story, work on what you have ('cuz I'm liking that) and then see what happens :D
Midnights Scream 2009-11-21 . chapter 23
the marks on Akuji's body finally make sense! :) great job!
Midnights scream 2009-11-21 . chapter 22
very short, but effective for what I think you're trying to do.
Midnights Scream 2009-11-21 . chapter 21
It's cute that Akuji is so loyal.
Midnightsscream 2009-11-21 . chapter 20
Poor Akuji. I'm T'kali has a plan or at least I hope he does. Great job!
Midnights Scream 2009-11-21 . chapter 18
:o poor Akuji the poor thing is forever tramatized. great job!
Divanora 2009-11-21 . chapter 23
You are mean for abandoning Akuji there! Will there be a sequel where T'kali gets him back? I really hope so!
Kaida Nyghtwalker 2009-11-20 . chapter 23
-.- ...If you don't have sequel you are dead. Wonderful as ever but if this is the absolute end then...I don't know. I just know I will be very dissappointed if you end it here...Other than that...GOOD JOB!!

Kaida Nyghtwalker 2009-11-20 . chapter 21
Yes! Finally, some PUNISHMENT! hehehehehe (^-^)
disgusteddiscussion 2009-11-20 . chapter 20
Wow. I think T'kali's story must be told - I like knowing more about him :) Pain works as well as beating *shrugs* And he's bottoming :O This will make me happy, oh yes. He is a crappy boyfriend, but I think with a little pain on his part and then when he actually starts to love Akuji I might be able to stop hating him :)

You are so very welcome for the reviews - any time!
Divanora 2009-11-20 . chapter 20
Posting anon because I'm at work and can't remember my password ;) YOU ARE SO MEAN!! Good to know T'kali will get what's coming to him. I am interested to see how long poor Akuji will be abandoned there. More soon please!!
disgusteddiscussion 2009-11-19 . chapter 19
I like Akuji high. He's . . . entertaining XD

Ok . . . I might be able to forgive T'kali. Maybe. Maybe if you beat him, I'll like him better ;P
Kaida Nyghtwalker 2009-11-19 . chapter 19
Another wonderful chapter! But I must ask (for I am blond) did T'kali have sex with the goat guy just so he would heal Akuji? How sweet of him...but he still needs to be punished for being such an evil little shit. I hope you don't mind if I've been advertising for you. All of my contemporaries have been wanting to read your story so I'll be sending it to them ASAP.

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