Eh I really wonder if this is merely a thank-you tribute or some kind of serious work. :S But anyway, I guess I'll review this albeit I'm not too sure about your own expectations in getting the reviews. Okay, basically, I can actually feel the sense of reality here. If there's anything I can suggest here, it will be the fact that you can actually improve on the wording rythmm like making the ending words flow like a song and what not. But then again, seeing all your works really made me have this impression that you're not too used to poetry work.

And here's one interesting idea I've just got: Why not write your IA experience in the form of a parody humour fiction? Of course I'm not telling you to offend other people in SMC via this means, but if you actually have a thick skin mentality, then I don't think it will actually harm your own pride in making yourself as the main object of the jokes. Yes you get it. My suggestion of humour here was something being done at your own expense. :D In fact I think this is the best way to crack jokes without offending anyone. Of course like I've said just now, you need to have a certain thick skin, but I guess that won't be a problem. XD

P.S: The Eternal Grail is up with a new chapter. Hope to see your review for it soon. :)