Interesting is all i can really say.

Very interesting so far. I wonder what happens? I think your story flows very well. Good job.

Hehehe...YES. Epic win. Fascinating story. More than anything else, I'd say it makes just the right amount of sense. Confusing at first glance, but meaningful if you look deeper. I like it. ^_^ Your grammar could use a quick look-over, but the style is nice and fits the meaning excelently.