 awanida 2009-11-24 . chapter 19 awsome i've been following as you know and i love it so muh you rock! keep giong make it 50 chapters i don't care i'll keep reading awsome |
 Strawberry-Banana-Smoothie0208 2009-11-24 . chapter 19interesting... but i still loved it! I cant wait for another chapter! |
 Black Dragon of F1R3 2009-11-23 . chapter 19 sweet keep goin! this is interesting! |
 Strawberry-Banana-Smoothie0208 2009-11-19 . chapter 18I liked this chapter! It was really good and it sets things up for the next ones! Update soon! |
 pearlsandacigarette 2009-11-19 . chapter 4So far I've only finished chapter four, but I wanted to say that you're a fantastic writer. The summary left me a bit skeptical, but since it was titled for a Brand New song, I decided to give it a try. Right about now, I'm pressing play on my Brand New playlist and settling in to read the rest. |
 awanida 2009-11-19 . chapter 18 awsome keep it going |
 Strawberry-Banana-Smoothie0208 2009-11-18 . chapter 17I liked the two new chapters! Short yes but I like you method and I definelty want you to finish this story! |
 Too Lazy to Log in 2009-11-18 . chapter 17 dude keep going its gettin real good!! |
 awanida 2009-11-18 . chapter 15 stronly opposed to what miss. narrator is about to do |
 Gab.ri.elle.J 2009-11-18 . chapter 15I'll keep reading :) hehe
Nice work :) |
 Rimca Sonali 2009-11-17 . chapter 15I honestly don't know on the rating change...I love the story how it is going...but if the language starts to get bad or there's a lot of sex or related things I don't think i'll keep reading it...but that's just me...I can put up with a little but if it gets too detailed or goes too far on that side it'd be a very hard choice... |
 phlegmsoda. 2009-11-17 . chapter 15Strongly in favor. :D bring on the smutt. xD |
 Strawberry-Banana-Smoothie0208 2009-11-17 . chapter 15I wont mind to much if it goes to M, just as long as it isnt to descriptive, if you know what I mean. But i wont stop reading and reviewing! |
 Strawberry-Banana-Smoothie0208 2009-11-17 . chapter 14awesome chapter! I cant wait to find out what happens next! |
 awanida 2009-11-17 . chapter 13nice keep going devon sounds drunk |