I prefer the second version with the sunbeams because I imagine God as being very bright.
But where is the fog of the German version? I would have written: “through the misty forests of my mind”.

But that’s only a small detail. I really like your Haikus.

Very poetic!

Here I definitely prefer the English version. It sounds like a song.

Like in mysticism your relation to God (Jesus?) is almost erotic! I like the contrast balm (which heals not only the body but also the soul) – cracked lips.

A very beautiful haiku (the birds and the sheres!), but I prefer the German version. Strange enough but it’s more melodic.

The reader expects that you smell a flower, but not that you are the flower. So your poem is a real Haiku with an surprising turn in the last line.

these are beautiful little poems! they remind me of psalms. i love the way you used them to show how each sense can link us to God. my favorite is probably the one for sight. i'm a visual person, i guess. anyways, excellent work! i really like these!