Yeah, it made sense. I really liked it. Especially the ending. Good job!

Returning review;

Yes, it made sense. :D

I especially liked these lines:

"The bar has been set,
The moment is nigh –
We cannot escape, we will not escape;
Escape from the cycle of

Time."

So very gripping. And so true, you know? I loved the flow too, good job! :)