This is such an interesting idea, all the characters are so interwebbed and credible, in the way their personalities suit their form of speech. Ashton is a darling, and while it isn't obscenely expressed, the feelings of guilt, death and mourning are there, clinging to the story like lingering perfume, it's all very well-written

This is unbelievably gorgeous. I read it late last night and I haven't been able to get it out of my head all day. So poetic... I especially love the repetition when Neptune and Ashton's relationship is described in the same words as Neptune and Raven's... beautiful. Thank you for this poignant story!

I really love this style in the piece of work. It is very melancholy, as it should be, but at the same time there is this little spark of love.

My favorite line is the bit about meaningless sex. It made me smile.

I'm in awe. This is beyond beautiful.

Two words: incomprehensibly beautiful.

This is beautiful, Chas. That's all I can say.