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monkyy109 2009-11-28 . chapter 16
AW that was a cute ending ;]
Smiling Serenade 2009-11-28 . chapter 16
Oh, this is cute! A bit rushed, but sweet, nonetheless. :)
give.me.back.my.drumsticks 2009-11-28 . chapter 16
Loved the ending. Very sweet. And cliche, but I suppose that is what gives it spunk. Heh.
checkyesdana 2009-11-28 . chapter 16
aww yayy! happiness
Sunsetshadow19 2009-11-28 . chapter 16
A truly original story. I did, however, feel that it was a bit rushed in the scheme of their relationship. The back story of his love felt a little out of nowhere. However, it was really interesting and I enjoyed reading it immensely.

I really liked Andrew- he was so multi-faceted with all of the weird dates that they went on. She really did try to get him to hate her- but i really liked the ending where she was the one at fault. I wish both of them luck in their quest to take over the world.

I look forward to reading your other stories.
moonlitmidnight 2009-11-28 . chapter 16
I loved it! Although I did think that could have been a little longer... and I personally would have included a little prelude into their future life together... lol... n e ways... great story! I really really really enjoyed it!

You should read my story though... it's called Mistaken Love... and obviously, my pen name is moonlitmidnight. So check it out.

Okie dokie, I'll leave you to it.
AlphaBeatKayGee 2009-11-28 . chapter 16
AW that was amazing! Loved this story. Thanks fr coming back to finish it and such. It was great of you even with the fear of soemone stealing it. Anyhow! Hope you write more! Until then!!
Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2009-11-28 . chapter 16
Cuteness! It was absolutely adorable...and I loved the changed ending. Can't wait to read more!
Princess of Chocolate 2009-11-28 . chapter 15
NOO! NOT ONLY ONE MORE CHAPTER! ALL THE GOOD STORIES ARE ENDING! :'(

Poor, poor Andrew. I feel sorry for him. Really, really sorry. Sigh, Sophie is such an idiot. Maybe if she'd just TALKED to Chelsea and Andrew. But, in a way it's not Sophie's fault. I would appreciate it if you added that into the next chapter: THIS IS ALL CHELSEA'S FAULT. Her and her stupid suspicions. :)
monkyy109 2009-11-27 . chapter 15
DUN DUN DUN ;];];];] hahha... for i minute once upon a time i was scared Elliot was in love with her...lols ;]
moonlitmidnight 2009-11-27 . chapter 15
Ah?! Why did it have to end...this is the one part I hate about fictionpress...whenever u find a good story...u have to wait for I it be updated before reading the next chapter and when u leave off like this...it makes me impatient lol...please update soon!
Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2009-11-27 . chapter 15
Ahh! So cute. :) This is MUCH better than the original in my eyes. It feels more...complete. Even though it's not over yet. Does that make sense?

Update soon!
checkyesdana 2009-11-27 . chapter 15
oh yayy Chelsea is okay with it! I'm so excited for a reunion. Its so cute Andrew has always liked her. cna't wait to see how this ends
AlphaBeatKayGee 2009-11-27 . chapter 15
Oh man! Its almost over. Love this story! Good luck writing the rest! Update soonn
Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2009-11-26 . chapter 14
Aw. :( Poor Andrew.
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