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XxZebbie-CullenxX 2009-12-09 . chapter 12
Aww, I like this, it's cute. And Luke rocks :)
Update soon!
esmeralda123 2009-12-08 . chapter 12
ben is such a son of a ** -.- ugh i hate him please please please dont make amy pregnant :( but update soon :) love the sotory!
J.u.n.k.i.3. 2009-12-07 . chapter 12
wow.

so, it was just as I had predicted...the ** who's name is Ben raped Amy and Luke almost broke it off-or did break it off- with her...

that's very sad, but I understand. Luke really wanted to be Amy's first but she messed up and allowed someone else to take that honor from him.

Anyways...I'm glad you like my pen-name. I thought it was cute too. =D

Peace and (J.u.n.k.i.3.) Love, hun.

bluebubble112 2009-12-07 . chapter 12
No one would do that.
If they had just been raped then they wouldn't be able to have sex with someone.
The human mind doesn't work like that.
Xini-92 2009-12-07 . chapter 12
Your history is great!! I read it only in a day! Go on with it!

From Spain, Xini-92
askingautumn18 2009-12-07 . chapter 12
haha first to review the new chapter! Loves it like always, and glad that her and Luke made up. Ben is a dick, plain and simple-again referring to the personal experience I had, same thing happened. Ugh, hope they used at least some sort of protection, and for god's sake if they didn't don't make Amy pregnant from that jerk-though it would make for dramatic storytelling haha.
sweet_melody 2009-12-06 . chapter 11
o m g ! i feel for luke...she shouldnt have done any of that !
askingautumn18 2009-12-06 . chapter 11
I am totally in love with your story, partially because it reflects my own experience with this subject. And the way it went down was definitely NOT with the person I wanted it to be with. Alas, great story-can't wait to see what happens!
J.u.n.k.i.3. 2009-12-06 . chapter 11
-gasp- ohmigawd!

did she get raped, because that's totally what it seemed like!

oh, please don't let her get raped!
bluebubble112 2009-12-06 . chapter 11
dun dun DUN
its luke right?
sarcasm is my middle name 2009-12-01 . chapter 10
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hannah1016776 2009-11-17 . chapter 10
Update soon.
Jackie.Forever 2009-11-17 . chapter 10
I liked it. I liked the ending of this chapter. So cute.
And I also wonder how long it'll last. And that they can have a serious conversation where he reassures her that she's just not another fling/girl or whatever. Hahah.
I also thought the whole family issue was...a good idea for the story. I was confused at first but I figured it out about her dad being a director.
Her brother is really funny too!
And I"m glad Jude talked to Harry about the whole pregnancy and I was like "Aw..." when I read when harry kissed her and touched her stomach a bit. I feel so bad for the situation though about the pregnancy.
And I couldn't help but burst out laughing when Luke was telling his grades: "and a C in Graphics…” Luke explained warily. I beamed like the sun; my boyfriend is so smart.
I thought that was hilarious when she beamed like the sun, etc. Haha.
Update soon!
la1167 2009-11-17 . chapter 10
ha ha- my dad is totally like that with any boy i bring home. you got it spot on :) keep up the good writing :) can't wait for more
Jackie.Forever 2009-11-09 . chapter 9
They're together! :D
Aaron sounds cute.
Dang, meeting the parents...I really hope it goes well!

Update soon!
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